Too Narrow Thesis Statements

Take a look at these four essay topics, and tell me why they won’t work as a topic for your paper:

  • psychology
  • Romanticism
  • World War II
  • music

If you said that all of these are great subjects but they aren’t great topics because they’re too broad, you’re right.

You cannot possibly write a good essay about such a large topic in only a few pages. There’s simply too much information to include and not enough space to put it in. It’s like stuffing five pounds of potatoes into a three-pound sack. It just isn’t going to work.

Don’t know how to narrow a topic that’s too broad? Feel like you’re sinking fast and need some help ASAP?

Hang in there. I’m about to throw you a lifeline and show you how to narrow a topic and write a focused paper.

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How to Tell If Your Topic Is Too Broad

If your mind is racing with so many different options and angles that you don’t know where to start, chances are your topic is too broad.

Here’s an example.

Let’s say you want to write about skateboarding. You have four pages to write a convincing essay about your topic, but what should you write about?

You might write about the origins of skateboarding, skateboarding at the X Games, or skateboard clothing, jargon, tricks, or culture.

See what I mean? This topic is too broad, and you cannot possibly write an effective essay that encompasses everything about skateboarding in only four pages.

You’ll need to narrow it to something more manageable. Luckily, I’m here to help. Let’s dive into how to narrow a topic and write a focused paper, shall we?

Three Strategies for How to Narrow a Topic

Not all strategies work best for all topics, so try a combination of all of these to see which works best for your topic.

Strategy #1: Be more specific

To narrow your topic, think of ways to make your topic more specific by focusing on a smaller aspect of the topic, one key component of the topic, a specific time period, or perhaps a specific location.

Here’s what I mean.

If you want to write about music, consider how you might be more specific. What type of music do you want to write about? Will you write about hip hop, jazz, country, pop, opera, or some other type?

Will you focus on music from the United States, or will you write about music from another country? Will you focus on current hits, music from the 1960s, or music from another era?

For this example, let’s focus on US pop music in recent decades. (See, the topic is already much narrower, right?)

Strategy #2: Ask journalists’ questions

Ask yourself who, what, when, where, why, and how.

Asking these questions will help you focus your ideas and help you consider new angles to your topic.

Let’s apply these to the topic of pop music in the United States.

  • Who? Boy bands, female artists, one-hit wonders
  • What? Hit records, major fails, highest earners
  • When? Current acts, musicians of various decades
  • Where? United States
  • Why? Compare acts, inform readers, argue who is the best/worst
  • How? How did they become so popular? How did their popularity fizzle so quickly?

As you answer these questions, you’ll notice that you still have a lot of information to sort through—and a lot of decisions to make.

Some of these decisions will be made for you by your assignment guidelines. For instance, if you have to write an argument essay, you certainly aren’t going to compare NSYNC to One Direction or tell readers how Taylor Swift rose to fame. Neither of these topics are argumentative.

Instead, you could argue that NSYNC is more talented than One Direction (or vise versa).

Strategy #3: Research

Even though research is listed third on this list, it doesn’t mean you have to research last. You might need to spend some time researching to learn more about your topic even before you figure out how to narrow a topic.

And just because you research once to narrow your topic doesn’t mean the research is over. You might need to return to your narrowed topic and research it again to learn more about that topic. (I know. It feels like a never-ending process, doesn’t it?)

As you research, look for specifics about a subject and check to see what others are writing about. You might just read something you hadn’t thought about that would make a great topic.

If, for example, you were still trying to find a way to narrow your skateboarding topic, a quick Google search might lead you to information about skateparks.

You might have to write a persuasive paper, and suddenly you’re inspired to write your paper about why your local community needs to build a skatepark.

What a great idea! See? A little research can go a long way in when you’re figuring out how to narrow a topic!

Let’s look at the pop music example again.

In this case, a little research can help you narrow the list of countless one-hit wonders to a short list of songs from the 1980s, 1990s, and 2000s.

Here are a few examples to start your list:

With a solid list of examples, you can listen to the songs again and again and start to figure out what they might have in common and why they were so popular. (Your research might also help with the analysis of what made these songs hits.)

If you need more one-hit wonders, here’s a Wikipedia list for inspiration.

Researching a more scholarly subject? Read 5 Best Resources to Help With Writing a Research Paper.

The Narrowed Topic

Once you’ve sufficiently narrowed your topic, put it all together to form the focus of your paper.

In our example, we narrowed the broad topic of music to a comparison of one-hit wonders of the 1980s–2000s and included an examination of what makes the songs popular.

Now, since you learned how to narrow a topic,you have a sense of where you’re going and what you should be writing about. Now you’re on your way to writing a focused paper.

Don’t stop there!

Before you start writing, turn your narrowed topic into an effective thesis statement.

A thesis statement about one-hit wonders might look like this:

From the 1980s through the 2000s, one-hit wonders in pop music have managed to solidify their places in music history through one key musical component: a catchy hook.

Notice how the thesis statement is specific and narrowed to explain to readers exactly the focus of your paper. (This thesis also gives you a clear focus and will make writing your paper much easier.)

Now that you know how to narrow a topic for your paper (and cannot stop singing one of those catchy, one-hit wonders–you’re welcome), you can (finally) start writing.

When you’ve finished your draft, send it our way for review.

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Choosing and Refining Topics

Deciding When a Topic Is Too Narrow

Steve Reid, English Professor
You have to careful so your topic is not too narrow for your audience. You don't want readers to say, " Well, so what? I couldn't care less." One the most important roles a topic plays is impacting an audience. If you get so narrowed and focused, a topic can become too academic or pedantic. For example, every year at graduation I watch people laugh when they hear the title of a thesis or dissertation. The students who wrote these documents were very narrowed and focused, but their audiences were very restricted.

Though student writers most often face the challenge of limiting a topic that is too broad, they occasionally have to recognize that they have chosen a topic that is too narrow or that they have narrowed a workable topic too much. A topic is too narrow if you can't find any information about it. For example, suppose your foreign language subject to, "foreign language policy in South Dakota." Although you might have a strong interest in this topic, South Dakota may not have a specific policy about foreign languages. If you have chosen the topic, "teaching Chinese in elementary schools," and your research attempts have been fruitless, it may be that you are considering a topic that no one else has previously presented. In other words, no one has determined that Chinese should be a major language taught as commonly as Spanish or French. If this happens to be the case, keep your topic in mind, because it could very well be an excellent topic for a graduate thesis or dissertation. However, it is also likely to be a difficult topic to handle in a ten-page essay for an education class, due in two weeks.

If your topic is too narrow, try making it broader by asking yourself related questions.

  • What foreign languages are taught in South Dakota schools?
  • Or where is Chinese taught and why?

Once you've found a different direction in which to move with your topic, you can try narrowing it again.

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